Suggestions
I absolutely love Divergent, but I do have some suggestions on the climax ending. I think it could have been a little bit slower and more descriptive of what happened. It made sense, but I almost felt as if it was rushed. The climax usually takes up several chapters, but it only took up a couple. I also understand that you don't want to put a whole trilogy in one book, so that may be why. They just killed off so many characters so easily, and they felt rushed to die almost. I feel like she could have put a little more time in some of the deaths and other important people.